Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

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Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 11:21 am
Reviewer: Trish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 10:49 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really love this one. And a great cliffhanger too. Hope the next chapter isn't too long - can't wait!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next one is coming soon I promise!
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 9:51 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! What a cliffhanger! Great chapter! I am greatly enjoying Kieran as a foil to Harry. I see more issues and problems between the two in the future. I am loving your Snape. Great thoughts in this chapter from both Snape and Harry. It makes sense that Harry would get so upset about his mum. Great story and thanks so much for the update!

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! There's definitely going to be conflict between the two that Snape's going to have to deal with. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 9:41 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    What a place to stop! Hope the next chapter comes along quickly. Its a good sign that Snape is giving Harry the chance to tell his side of things, and not taking Kieran's viewpoint as gospel.

    Author's Response: Yeah Snape's seeing Harry a little differently now. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 5:45 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Heal him Snape!!!!

    Author's Response: Lol he's getting there!
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 3:07 am
Reviewer: 44robot44 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i really like this story. i hope you will update this soon. very entertaining:D

    Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely will be updating soon! :)
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 1:56 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Kieran deserved to be punched in the face.... With a book... Or two..... Anyway, love the story and with the epic ending you put at the end of it, I will definitely be waiting for the update for this

    Author's Response: Yeah definitely. Lol. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: On the Edge 02 Apr 2016 1:06 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved how you did the conflict between the two boys and how Snape handled it.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: On the Edge 01 Apr 2016 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! What a cliffie. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is coming soon!
Title: Shattered Expectations 31 Mar 2016 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    How did he know it was Harry? Loved the chapter but found the mix up of tenses a little difficult to read.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I edited the chapter so that it was more clear it was Harry who was having the nightmare. What mix up of tenses are you referring to?

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