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Title: Shattered Expectations 29 Mar 2016 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoy your story. Please updated soon. The days between the 17 and 26 March were just agony for me ( i was like cheeking every hour to see if there were any new chapter). As you can see i am no t english so story for the mistake. And i dont me an To ne rude. I just want to compliment you for your Work. Your are really good at it.
    One more thing if you want your story last longer tried not to make Snape changes his mind about Harry To soon it s more realistic because who can
    erase years of hatred in one sommer. And as Snqpe is a very obtuse it s understable that it ont change his mind before a long time maybe.
    But it is your story so do what you think would fit the story. I m no one to force you To change your mind.

    Forget what i said And keep going you are the best :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yes I agree that it's difficult to get rid of hatred in one summer, but I think the fact that Snape knows Harry is his son, his and Lily's, will get him to change his mind a bit quicker than if they had no relationship other than student and professor. Thanks for the review! I promise next chapter is coming soon. :)
Title: Shattered Expectations 28 Mar 2016 3:46 pm
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad your enjoying it!
Title: Shattered Expectations 28 Mar 2016 2:37 am
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great. I hope you keep writing it's!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is coming soon. :)
Title: Shattered Expectations 28 Mar 2016 1:40 am
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your story is great so far, very well written. Please continue it :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Next chapter coming really soon. :)
Title: Shattered Expectations 27 Mar 2016 2:12 pm
Reviewer: Trish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Keep up the good work

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Shattered Expectations 27 Mar 2016 3:46 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I like where this is heading!!

    Author's Response: Thank you :)
Title: Shattered Expectations 27 Mar 2016 3:08 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I already read this on fanfiction, but let me just say again how awesome I think this fic is!

    Author's Response: Thanks! It just takes me longer to upload on here.
Title: Shattered Expectations 27 Mar 2016 1:19 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh sooo mean. More asap please. ;)

    Author's Response: It's coming soon I promise!
Title: Shattered Expectations 26 Mar 2016 11:23 pm
Reviewer: ilreies (Signed) [Report This]
    oooooooooooh this is lovely!! characters are all def on point and this is really really well-written! every plot point is developed and characters' thoughts are clearly depicted.

    oh my poor heart, oh poor harry. wish i can just give him a hug, be strong kid!

    hahaha can't wait for more updates from you!

    Author's Response: Haha don't we all wish that we could give Harry a hug? He definitely needs one at the moment. Thanks for the review!
Title: A Prince's Manor 25 Mar 2016 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A good cliffie thank you

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