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Title: The Curse 04 Jul 2016 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    =_= Why are those two still there? I would think that they would be fair-weather family and Clarice would have taken her son home after an attack like that.

    Ugh, either way, I don't care. Harry's definitely the priority here. Nightmare curse Vs. a measly calming draught. I want to say that the curse will run its course eventually and that if Harry survived them the first time around, he'll be able to the second time. But with this curse, it's compounding all his injuries instead of letting him heal between each one. Well, if he does survive this in one piece (and I also hope it just runs the course once, and doesn't loop back to the beginning until something breaks permanently), Poppy will have a first-hand account of Harry's past medical record.

    I've just been thinking about things in general lately and I've come to the conclusion that while most kids show accidental magic by summoning a toy and such, the vast majority of Harry's accidental magic was self-healing, with the very, very odd occurance of an external incident (The blue hair, apparating to the roof of the school...). With how powerful Harry is, it's this accidental magic that's kept him alive this entire time.

    Author's Response: Yeah I agree that without Harry's accidental magic helping to heal him, he probably wouldn't have survived those times with the Dursleys. With this curse though, they're happening one after the other so there really isn't any time for his magic to heal him. That's why Poppy and Severus are going to have to keep healing him as the injuries appear while he's under the curse.

    I don't plan on keeping him under the curse for too long, especially not long enough for the curse to restart from the beginning. I think Dumbledore would be able to figure out the counter curse before it gets to that point.

    It's definitely going to be a difficult road ahead for Harry though.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The Curse 03 Jul 2016 8:39 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait for more
Title: The Curse 27 Jun 2016 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic and very well written thank you
Title: The Curse 23 Jun 2016 2:23 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I understand that she wants her son safe. But she's still a bitch.

    Author's Response: Lol I agree.
Title: The Curse 22 Jun 2016 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I am glad that Severus is taking a stand for Harry. Poor kid, having to go through that. I really hope that Harry comes out of it okay. Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I know I'm putting Harry through a lot right now, but it's going to get better soon.
Title: The Curse 21 Jun 2016 4:41 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh Clarice and Kieran are both spoiled in my opinion..... I'm rooting for harry all the way

    Author's Response: Lol I'm with you there!
Title: A Test of Strength 05 Jun 2016 6:36 pm
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, whatever that spell is, it's purely physical. Or at least complicated enough that a general scan can't pick it up. Snape stating that Harry is his son to someone not in the family? Good, very good thing. A sign of progress, that.
    Welp, at least the boy and his mother are still as anonymous as ever, thus not a target.
    When Harry wakes up (He WILL wake up!), I can possibly see some scared/relieved yelling of 'NEVER do something as STUPID and RECKLESS AGAIN!' He just can't catch a break, can he? Not even in the summertime. I just hope that he wakes up and is healed soon. But knowing Tom as we all do, that was no simple spell. I've learned that purple is never good when it comes to spells. For some reason, they're always the nastiest ones.
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 10:20 pm
Reviewer: 👍 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pls update asap i live for this
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter very tense and a good ending
Title: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nicely written:) hope the next chapter will be out soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, the next chapter is coming soon. :)

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