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Reviews For Fairytale Of Home
I think I would feel an immense sense of betrayal and anger towards Snape and Lily for not telling me my own story. Having to find out from strangers just a few weeks before school starts has got to hurt. He must feel so unimportant and neglected. And angry most likely. I know I said last chapter that kids can more easily forget and forgive bad parents. They can actually create a better relationship if the parent decides to try. But damn...after this, I just don't know how that is possible. It just keeps getting worse and worse. He might even want to go to hogwarts now just to get away from them.
Vamos para adelante!!!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot! And I think your English is great but I'm not a native speaker either! :)
Lovely chapter as usual. I was happy to see the introductory paragraph with hints to some possible concern on Snape's side for Harry's well being. Like I have said before I think that deep down and with the right motivation he does care for the boy. His own fears and general dislike of James just makes his efforts and attentions often misplaced. I also still believe that Harry does trust and rely somewhat on Snape, even though he might not like it. I think with a lot of work and rough road ahead he could grow close enough to him to have a father-son relationship. It would take work from both and probably also some external pressure. I'm glad you had him get lost in Knockturn Alley. I was actually hoping for that. I have a feeling that there are 2 people that are not very happy with him for running off though. I was almost hoping for a Snape rescue, but Hagrid's great too. I look forward to the next chapter and I'm also curious where Harry will be sorted. I wonder if Snape will realize Aofie's treatment of Harry at some point or walk in on her hurting him, or pushing him down the stairs or anything like that causing the broken arm. I'm sure Snape would have some nasty potion for that. Great job!
Author's Response: Sadly i did not :(
I just don't know how you are going to get these two on the road to a better relationship. Sure, Snape might finally wake up and honesty examine is actions, but it doesn't take away the hurt and damage done to Harry. How Harry could ever trust him is something I'm quite curious about. But in fairness, kids are better able to forgive abuse than adults. Author's Response: That's very true indeed!
Author's Response: Hehe.. That's very to the point ;)
Here are my thoughts on the chapter..This chapter, as your other ones, was great. I think Harry went a tad bit too far when he took Snape's wand. I think he does still have a little bit of hope and trust in Snape since he is still trying to provoke a reaction from the man. If he didn't care at all I think he wouldn't even bother trying. The adoption could be interesting should they go though with it. I wonder if it would somehow (maybe through blood or magic) change Snape's view of Harry a little. Maybe he would be prompted to feel concern or responsibility for him in certain situations unwillingly or unexpectedly. I still feel there's a little bit of good left in their troubled relationship. |
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