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Reviews For Seasons of Love
Your other two chapters were great too, I just didn't get a chance to review as I ended up quite ill in the hospital. I look forward to the next one. Great job. Author's Response: Hey nnjjj! Great to see you back and on the mend. I hope you're feeling better. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the last few chapters. I do my best to keep everyone in character, for both versions of the story. I will do my best to ensure a good amount of Sev and Harry interaction in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Ahhh, Severus even when he's being nice he's a bit of a jerk (at least it wasn't to Harry this time). It's good for Harry to know someone out there cares how he's doing.
Author's Response: Thank you, I like writing this version of Snape. Here he can see past Harry's look and remember this is Lily's son. Sadly, that something canon Sev never figured out how to do. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks Fmh. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing.
great job. Author's Response: He is very lucky, even if it doesn't always feel that way. Harry needs a strong but caring hand after growing up the Dursleys. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
Loving this story. Great job. Author's Response: No, he can't, not with Severus on the case. Thank you. It's always nice to hear people like what you've written.
Love your twist on Canon. Great job. Author's Response: Well, Harry will be a lot harder to look after being so far away in the tower. Severus probably hoped that his influence would mean there was less one idiotic Gryffindor, but nope. Harry is too much his parents' son.
Can't wait to see where you go with the rest of the story. Author's Response: Thank you for commenting. I am very glad you are enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment it made me go back and look at what I had done for the next chapter. Hopefully it's bit more to your liking.
Author's Response: I stepped it up in the next chapter. Hopefully, you like that one better. Thanks for the comments, it makes me want to do better. I made changes to the next chapter based on this and other comments. |
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