This story is amazing and this chapter is so sad and I love it
I loved this story. The way you write is captivating, despite some cringy aspects that bothered me. I don't know if it's just me, but it feels really annoying reading accent all the time, especially when english is not my first choice. And, of course, there is the misconception about Parseltongue being dangerous and dark. I've read so many good stories who fail exploring this trait only beacause it's "evil" when it's just a gift. If talking to horses or bunnies were a thing, Parseltongue wouldn't be frowned upon, I guess.
Those were the only aspects that I didn't like and I thought it was fair talking about them with you, but I REALLY LOVED your story and your writing, specially what was made of the Dursleys. Not all stories talk about it, they think thak Harry leaving them is good enough or that death should be good revenge. I'm glad you made it about justice.
Thanks for this story, I really loved. Bye.
Absolutely loved reading this! It’s been a while since I read HP fanfiction and this has well and truely left me wanting more! I’m normally a bit put off by original characters but I loved Covey so much! I’d love to read a sequel 😍
| Title: Chapter 40
| 06 Nov 2017 4:03 am
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Thank you so much for completing your wonderful story I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it!
| Title: Chapter 39
| 06 Nov 2017 3:30 am
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Thank you a very good take on cannon
I love this story and would love to read a sequel. Wonderful job!
I loved reading this story! My favorite part was probably where Snape and Dumbledore visited Petunia and gave her the ultimatums.
Thank you for the story!
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