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Title: Chapter 34 17 Oct 2017 7:33 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Very intriguing. I am eager to see what Hermione has in mind, and what Harry's trying to remember that he can't quite put his finger on just yet.
Title: Chapter 34 15 Oct 2017 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good ol Hermione! Thank you an excellent chapter but I miss Covey.
Title: Chapter 34 13 Oct 2017 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    That, ended very vaguely. Very much indeed. And even though I was fascinated by your theories, I couldn't make head nor tails of it. Care to explain?
    Not much of a chapter, but a chapter indeed. Lets see where this leads. No Severus' perspective, I am disappointed.
    I am actually waiting for the chapter of Lily's Lost Boys.
    That comment about your theories, I wasn't sarcastic, I truly found that fascinating. I had always found the human mind fascinating. Dreams and consciousness and sleep, it is just a big mystery, isn't it? I just want to hear more. The way JKR had described Occlumency, it was very engaging, I still can't completely grasp the concepts of Legilimency and Occlumency. Lets see your take on it!
Title: Chapter 33 10 Oct 2017 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter I love Harry's attempt to put things right!
Title: Chapter 32 10 Oct 2017 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, typical Severus to jump to this conclusion. Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 33 09 Oct 2017 10:15 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, one of the first thing that came into my mind after reading halfway through it was, everything goes wrong with Harry.
    Though, at least in the end they made up.
    As far as I know, with a few teeth knocked out you can still speak perfectly. My front two milk teeth had fallen together when I was around 8 or 9 and I could speak perfectly clearly.
    Whatever, I like this chapter, at least it doesn't end in a cliffhanger but to be honest, I like the story Lily's Lost Boys better.
Title: Chapter 32 08 Oct 2017 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Biggi15 (Signed) [Report This]
    thanks for sharing, hopefully Snape will see soon what really happened
Title: Chapter 32 04 Oct 2017 10:08 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, it had to happen, didn't it? Snape is quite obtuse when in a rage, though I like this version better, actually I love it. Lets see how Snape feels if he really does find out himself that Harry had had an accident. (Keyword being himself.)
    Thanks for taking me out of the depression I had found myself in after reading 13 Reasons Why. Quite depressing, but when I saw the notification of an update, I smiled, so, waiting for the new chapter! Love it so far!
Title: Chapter 31 02 Oct 2017 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Should be a positive chapter but you have skilfully brought all Harry's and Severus' insecurities into it, thank you so much
Title: Chapter 31 29 Sep 2017 5:45 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh well, though the chapter didn't end in a cliffhanger, it left me unsatisfied but I can't blame you, of course, as this was even larger than the last one.
    Snape is acting like Harry did with Cho, or even worse, he doesn't know what to do or how Harry is feeling. You said that Snape is going to talk with Harry, I am looking forward to that talk.
    Ooooh, Harry is going to be one handsome lad, isn't he? Tall, green eyes, jet black hairs, now there aren't even glasses obscuring his beautiful jade eyes.
    For a moment I had completely forgotten that they were in Harry's fifth year and Voldemort was still trying to get Harry to get the prophecy. I see that there is no Umbridge yet. What about the blood quill? Have you mentioned it? I guess I would have to reread the story?
    I don't suppose Umbridge is going to keep quite.
    Lets see what happens next.
    Can you give me a small pattern in your posting? I am tired of checking my email or this story every single day.

    Author's Response: I typically post chapters around every 3-4 days. But you can follow me, or this story, and then you will get an email when I post so you don't have to keep checking manually.

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