Great chapter. Can't wait to see snape and Harry's unresolved stuff play out :)
| Title: Chapter 30
| 28 Sep 2017 7:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat time! Poor Harry, why can't Severus see what he needs! Thank you for a tear jerking brilliant chapter
I don't know what, or why but as the new chapters are posted they start to get better, so I don't think that there is a need to say that that this one is my favourite so far. This one sent strange tingling sensations through my heart and stomach.
Even I have enough tact to know what Harry really wanted. Snape is jus pretty messed up, though not more than Vernon or Petunia........
Any way, it was a good chapter, I, for a fact know, if it was Covey instead of Severus, she would have known that Harry wanted to be proved wrong that Snape didn't care, ah well, as I said, Snape is pretty messed up.
By the way, may I ask, how many chapters does this story contain?
Author's Response: Probably around 40 chapters. It is all written, but I wrote it as one big file. So I still need to break it into chapters. I have started a sequel but I have other stories started too that I want to post once this one is completely up.
Wow. Amazing chapter. Gets you right in the heart! Can't wait to see how this develops
| Title: Chapter 29
| 18 Sep 2017 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A brilliant chapter thank you so much
I logged in specifically to say this:
"Holy shit..."
I literally sat with my mouth open for a moment and said "oh fuck" with my jaw slack a little.
The next chapter is going to be difficult, I can feel it. Oh maaannn.....
That last line sent the chills up my spine.* shudder*
If Vernon Dursley doesn't want to see Harry on a trampoline then he shouldn't forget his wallet.
I've got a sinking feeling that I know what's coming next.
Thanks for the update!
Is this Harry's second vision? Nice chapter, bu it wasn't good of you to leave the chapter in a cliffhanger, *pout*
Wow, lots happening in this chapter! I enjoyed Dobby's selection for Harry's outfit. I wonder if Severus and Covey were arguing about Snape returning to Voldy? It doesn't sound good for Snape.
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