Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 23 06 Jan 2018 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done, I'd forgotten about the mark so thanks for the reminder. No further forward on our mystery so waiting for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 23 05 Jan 2018 4:50 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    A bloody good chapter! For a moment I thought that Christmas is gone, but alas, it hasn't.
    Glad the anger is gone from Snape.
    For a moment there I thought that Harry can sleep walk and ran off while sleeping and now Snape was looking for him, anyway, I am glad it was just a dream.
    For a moment I thought Snape would deny being afraid, but then he said, "Bloody terrified" and my heart swelled.
    Great chapter!
    At least this time you gave some closure........
    Lots of love, keep writing, and Happy New Year!! May you get lots of reviews!
Title: Chapter 22 27 Dec 2017 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear poor Harry! I don't blame Severus for being angry! Thank you so much for the chapter!
Title: Chapter 22 22 Dec 2017 10:06 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Pale blue eyes. Uh, was that, that the muggle guy that had been tortured with Harry, or is it Sirius, no, I guess not, I don't know why Ron would stare at him with reproachful eyes.
    Uh, when I read about what Harry wanted, I kind of wanted to bang my head through the wall. But I managed not to, thanks for updating!!
    Those blue eyes are still a mystery, right, I am not forgetting something, or anything, right?
Title: Chapter 21 19 Dec 2017 5:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no what has happened? A real cliffie this time. Thank you so much an excellent chapter
Title: Chapter 21 16 Dec 2017 2:40 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, what happened?! :(
Title: Chapter 21 16 Dec 2017 1:38 pm
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    So, has he actually been kidnapped--and if so, how did the kidnappers get through the wards... could Dobby have accidentally given them a way?

    Or maybe he's come down with something, and this is fever-induced delirium combined with him wandering off.

    Can't wait to find out!
Title: Chapter 21 16 Dec 2017 10:38 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    So, after a few chapters of relative calm, you give us action in the form of a freezing Potter on the verge of sinking into oblivion due to a flashback which forced him to come out of the house in a cold snowy day.

    I hope Severus doesn't get irritated that Harry went out, after all, he does tend to jump on to conclusions.........

    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! So happy that you are updating faster!
Title: Chapter 20 14 Dec 2017 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the first part with the potion and of course the Christmas tree. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 20 13 Dec 2017 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a very good thought to have while falling asleep Harry.
    Also, was that potion important? Or did you just add it to the story, because you didn't mention what became crystal clear. Gosh, the tree sounds just too beautiful!
    And did I tell you that I love you for updating the story earlier?

    Author's Response: The use for the potion will become "crystal clear" soon ;-). 

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