Hmmm... I like the logic.
Although I might have wished Ron ended up in Hufflepuff, I do like how you played on his chess strategies skills. It irks me that he never applies ot to "real" life.
Hufflepuff would have been nice too, but that might just be my soft heart toward the badgers speaking.
Can't wait for what happens next! (~.^)
Oooo.... this one is going to be fun!
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| 28 Aug 2017 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like your Harry, he is a clever chap, thank you
Interesting, though perhaps a little too well spoken for a kid his age, especially if he doesn't talk to many people.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: He reads a fair amount. His speech is a hair stilted, actually.
I'm so glad you decided to continue with Hogwarts Herself! I really love Harry's strength, resilience, and resolve. He's so strong-willed. It's very inspiring.
I can't wait to see what else you do with this! (~.^)
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