| Title: Trifle
| 07 Jun 2020 8:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely day now ruined! What a cliffie! Thank you for your story
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Enjoy the next chapter!
| Title: Smile Potion
| 07 Jun 2020 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely happy chapter thank you
Hello! Thank you for another awesome chapter ;) it occurred to me that perhaps I should endeavor to leave more comments behind on your stories because I love them all! I just wanted to let you know that I love “My Little Runaway,” “Cripple Me,” and “Learning Friendship” all so so SO much. It makes me so happy to see when you update any of your stories.
Into more specifics of this chapter... It took me by surprise when Severus had such an adverse reaction to the zoo tickets. But when I thought about it for a moment, it made sense. I really liked who you can stay true to the character you built for Severus and still take the reader by surprise.
I also caught how the kid in the park area didn’t take notice of Harry’s “girly” shirt. *wink wink* (It just emphasizes the thoughtlessness of the adults when Nana bought the shirt. I like the contrast.) I hope we see that kid in the future. o.0
Lastly.................
DUMBLEDORE CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!
SEVERUS WORKED SO HARD! What’s going to happen!? Is all that we hoped and dreamed for lost!!!
If I could give you kudos I would flood your inbox with them. Be well!
Oh no, please say Eileen and Sev can keep Dumbledore from sending Harry back.
Come on Sev, you know you want to adopt him!
Author's Response: He's getting there. Slowly, but surely. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Fire Ghosts
| 09 Mar 2020 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, thank you so much for updating
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for being always taking a minute to comment!
Oh Sev...
Author's Response: Sev has a lot to work through. Thanks for always reviewing!
| Title: A Special Place
| 03 Dec 2019 5:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I could shake Severus for being so blind as to what Harry needs and wants. However he may have woken up after those two words. Thank you for updating your wonderful story
Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for reading.
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