I totally disagree with your statement. This is some of the best HP fan fiction I have read and I hope you post Chapter 3 soon. I don't think you need to include the text of the letter as long as you kind of go over the gist of it. But of course, you are the author and I would read it either way.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been hesitant about it for a long time, but a few people here finally convinced me to post so here it is! I'm glad you like it.
Yay, Lily! Yay, Severus!!
Harry needs snuggles.
Maybe a stuffie.
I hope the text is included. I think Sev and Harry need to talk without any interruptions from Dumbledore.
Wonderful chapter. Exciting, a few 'aah' moments, and a Harry of an age to ask sensible questions. Lots of things in need of answers so I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
It'd be awesome if you included the text. We can speculate for ourselves, but how much cooler if Lily *knew* this kind of thing would eventually happen? ;-)
Esto es impresionante, he amado cada frase y como has construido el conflicto.
Sencillamente wow!!!
Gracias por un inicio épico en lo que promete ser una historia brillante
Okay, now I NEED more. yep.
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic ending! Thank you a wonderful start to the story
Great story please update soon!
Brilliant! I hope there will be more soon!
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