| Title: Those Who Choose You
| 21 Aug 2021 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for your entertaining and original story, l loved the ending
| Title: Those We Choose
| 21 Aug 2021 9:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely hopeful chapter
| Title: A Burden To Share
| 21 Aug 2021 8:30 pm
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Poor Harry, he is so insecure. It will be a mistake for them to try to chain him from his crusades
| Title: No Darkness Too Deep
| 21 Aug 2021 7:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter with a wonderful portrayal of how government departments can grind you down, thank you
"You seek trouble out." Lovely play on words! But what I really enjoy is how you show Harry finally understanding what "family" really is-- beautifully done! And as a writer, I can appreciate what goes into explicating what may seem obvious, but is still challenging to translate into actual, detailed narrative. Thank you! 😊
Absolutely loved descriptions of all the brooms! And, oh! can I relate to Justin's glass cleaning!!! I used to work retail furniture, and people ALWAYS had to test the thickness of the glass-topped tables, leaving fingerprints top & bottom! But there was a 2-year-old girl who actually LICKED every glass table she came to, leaving toddler SLIME on the glass! Some of the nastiest stuff I ever had to clean in that lovely store! Poor Justin!
| Title: The Potter Barrister, The Ruling, and Professor Snape’s Decision
| 19 Aug 2021 5:13 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed)
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Whoa!!! Drama, drama, DRAMA!!! Powerful chapter, full of unexpected twists! Love it!
"polite company" -- and then Lucius sneers at Harry... Sarcasm, or slip of the tongue? An admonishment aimed at Draco, certainly, but I had to laugh at Lucius Malfoy using "polite" in that particular context! 😉 The rest of the story really has grabbed my attention, and I'm eager to see how it plays out.
| Title: Those Who Choose You
| 16 Aug 2021 6:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I honestly don't want toleave-- like I'm prepared to chain myself too this chapter and wait lol this was an amazing ride and I Just can't thank you enough for it
| Title: The Truth That Harry Knew
| 16 Aug 2021 5:51 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I feel like he's got good intentions but the second snape gets angry and doesn't want harry anymore, Dumbledore will send him straight back to the dursleys. He still doesn't actually care that Harry's not safe or happy there as long as he's got lilys protection against voldemort. That lack of care that neglect puts Dumbledore in a "do not trust " column for me
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