| Title: No Darkness Too Deep
| 09 Aug 2021 12:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
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Gosh, but that was dramatic! I loved this newest Alley interlude! How will Harry fight this? Is there a way to take the ministry to court, either for violating laws on British or international standards? Surely there is some kind of right to work standard, or a law requiring them to prove those citations aren’t just made up?
I can’t wait to see what you have in mind to handle this!
ohhhh I'm feeling stressed for Harry ahaha the ministry is the worst! I really loved this chapter!
You updated!!!
I always thought this was abandoned at a bad spot. One chapter earlier would have felt more complete.
Harry really has to learn not to spend so impulsively. I know he has a lot. But that is a common problem with people who gain money fast. They spend it and then it is gone. But old money is for future generations as well.
I hope we will see Snape teaching him. But I don't know if he is much better at that than Harry.
| Title: The Bazaar
| 25 Jul 2021 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved how Harry made sure all of the house got sweets and the bazaar was great fun, thank you for all the updates.
| Title: A Shadow So Dark
| 25 Jul 2021 8:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Eclipsed
| 23 Jul 2021 8:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting take on the dementor attack. I don’t think I’ve read any story where Dumbledore apologised to the students, a good idea, thank you.
| Title: Business Doesn’t Wait For School ie. How Many Broomsticks Do You Need Potter?
| 22 Jul 2021 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved the owners of bookshop, great fun there. Thank you for all the updates, it’s wonderful as I love this story
| Title: On Holiday
| 22 Jul 2021 4:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the holiday and the quidditch match. Very imaginative to have them playing over the sea. Thank you so much.
I loved the concept of the bazaar, and the maps you drew. I hope that Sirius is safely ensconced in Harry’s new house and that we hear from him soon. Thanks for these amazing chapter updates, and looking forward to reading on.
I really loved all the new chapter and am not ashamed to beg for more soon!
Looks like Snape is mellowing out gradually. He gradually is warming up to Harry and his responsebility to him.
Love to read more about the alleys and how it is going with the Fae employees.
Keep up the good work and please, please, please update a lot more chapters soon! ;)
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