Thanks for another excellent chapter. Your characters feel so alive. Harry’s playing a difficult part in all this.
Intriguing! I wonder if that small boy was Severus from a time past?
Wonderful chapter. Your descriptions of Sweden and Kall Hus are vivid, and your characterization of Aunt Aggie is brilliant. I loved the subtlety of the interactions and emotions in this chapter.
I really like the way that you’ve portrayed Harry’s deaged state. Your description of his clothing was hilarious. I enjoyed seeing a sliver of humanity shine through Snape for a fleeting moment at the end there.
I wish that Harry had shown more restraint, but hopefully they’ll work things out! I’m looking forward to seeing where they go. Great story so far.
Your writing is excellent and such a pleasure to read. I loved Harry’s medicated impressions of Snape. The back story leading to the Dursleys abandoning Harry was refreshingly unique.
I’m excited to be catching up on your story! Your excellent first chapter has me hooked.
Loved it and cannot wait to see where it goes from here. Thanks for the update!
This was an amazing chapter !!!
I Loved Harry’s reaction, it’s seemed quite realistic and appropriate for his age (kids at that age understand lot of things around them)
I was worried at first that Snape would say he was his true biological father .. but this makes more sense.. and would not leave harry feeling betrayed once he recovered his memories (even if it will be rather complicated now for his young mind)
I can imagine it was heart breaking for him to know that his only family that he ever knew decided to get rid of him that easily … Will you expand more on his feelings? Maybe Severus will know some hidden secrets?? Can’t wait!
And man did the PLOT thicken, Hans introduction and the ministry’s time travel experiments really does shift the story to a deeper and darker direction…
Oh, and this chapter does prove some of my theories false, like harry being able to modify Snape’s memory, because as you mention it was done by a very skilled wizard (though it still doesn’t eliminate the possibility that it was of Agatha’s doing)
Or a new theory that it’s somehow an aftermath to a previous time travel that missed with time space continuem and somehow used harry as a way to either correct or terminate what happened back then
I don’t know truly
But I’m intrigued
Really can’t wiat for the next chapter
Thank you vertical much
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