| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 24 Jan 2021 7:10 pm
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| Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed)
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SOOOOO SWEET I don’t think it’s rushed at all I think you did very well with this. Incredible work!
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 16 Nov 2020 3:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Sirena (Signed)
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I spilled some tears here and there.
I must say that way Harry talked to Sirius was sooo manipulative, I was impressed ;)
I will be frank... I think that if you aimed for making it longer then one shot you would do much better with staying in characters - Severus being more stingy and sterm, Harry more keeping to himself, Sirius more mad... but I still really enjoyed reading it and it was good for one shot - again, you got tears from me, that count for something!
Keep up giving us awsome stories.
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 12 Nov 2020 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Witchy_Clover (Signed)
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I liked how you fleshed this out, and how snape and harry interacted in the beginning, it felt very real
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 01 Aug 2020 11:16 am
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| Reviewer: Villanelle (Signed)
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I loved this story. Thank you.
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 20 Mar 2020 11:12 am
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| Reviewer: itslikeorange (Signed)
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The ending was so sweet, it gave me warm and fuzzies :) thanks so much for writing!
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 27 Sep 2019 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed)
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I’m feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 13 Sep 2019 7:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
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Really really loved this! I liked the spin on the usual abused Harry story, about him actually trying to tell others about the abuse that's been going with the Dursleys, cuz usually most stories have him trying his damndest hard to hide it.
Harry seems so cynical during his talk with Snape while he is walking/running to Hogwarts, I wish I was a little like that when I was 13. I think that was my favourite part of the whole fic.
Healer Davies is magnificent and that awesome side character I want more of, you know? Clever, great, and, perhaps the person without whom none of this would have been possible.
I think this being a one shot was perfect. I loved it, it kinda really satisfied me in some way? And even though it did get pretty fluffy in the end, I loved it and it was perrrrrfect.
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 07 Aug 2019 12:46 am
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| Reviewer: SapphireClaw (Signed)
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Aaaaaaa A+!!!! Heckin rad!!! This was both sad and heart warming. You wrote everyone very well. Aaaaaa what a nice lil’ one shot. Great job
| Title: The Lie, The Visit, What Molly Had To Say, And The Curse
| 29 Jun 2019 5:08 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I liked that Snape seemed to be the one wanting a relationship with Harry more than Harry did at first. It made a change.
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