| Title: Chapter 2: letters from someone
| 01 May 2020 4:29 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I like your feisty Ariel.
Hi! I never read Harry!girl stories- just not a fan of the premise but I gave this one a chance and I’m really glad I did! It’s nicely written and I like the way the characters are developing. Thanks!
Hi! I never read Harry!girl stories- just not a fan of the premise but I gave this one a chance and I’m really glad I did! It’s nicely written and I like the way the characters are developing. Thanks!
Wonderful start.looking forward to more.
YOU'RE BACK! I saw the title and was like, wait a minute...checked the username, didn't recognize it, checked the profile...boom, there it was! I'm so happy you're back :) Of course I'm interested to see where this goes. I liked the way this chapter read...I got this sense of things just being disjointed, which makes sense. Poor Ariel doesn't have anything to keep her grounded. I wonder if she'll have psychological issues that take prominence in the story? And her hair...Petunia is such a b*&$#. Can't wait for the next update! Hope you're well!
Interesting start. I can’t help thinking of the Little Mermaid if her name is Ariel.
Author's Response: Ironically, I actually hate the Little Mermaid LOL. The movie plot always annoyed me for some reason.
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