I love the conclusion jumping.
I love the conclusion jumping.
| Title: Chapter 40: The Old Snape
| 23 Jul 2020 7:16 pm
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I loved the reverse of Severus, very clever but I missed the part of the former life this chapter. Very poignant that Harry wishes for the life where he dies rather than this life. Thank you for a wonderfully story
| Title: Chapter 39: The Interrogation
| 23 Jul 2020 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written, and the battle description was well done thank you
| Title: Chapter 38: Plans Change - Part 2
| 19 Jul 2020 8:13 pm
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Thank you, I like how you are keeping us in suspense about the outcome of the raid and about Alton’s motives
| Title: Chapter 37: Plans Change - Part 1
| 19 Jul 2020 5:47 pm
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Oh dear this seems a bad moment, thank you
| Title: Chapter 36: The Boggart
| 19 Jul 2020 5:13 pm
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Great chapter, I love the flashbacks to their previous life together and this was a wonderful one, thank you
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