| Title: Chapter 2: The Longest Day
| 07 Jun 2020 5:50 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Ohhh so sad. Poor Severus, and poor Harry. What a mess Snape is. This is painful, so full of angst. but very good. Sad that the potion didn't work right away, but I have a feeling that Snape will wake up in a different time. Maybe?
Great writing! I'm loving this story so far.
| Title: Chapter 1: I Failed Him
| 07 Jun 2020 5:39 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh this was so painful to read. But it was so good, so powerful. Wow. You do a fantastic job writing out how Severus feels, and setting things up. Marvelous.
That ending of this chapter, about Severus wanting to dream to see his son one last time.... wow. Powerfully painful, but oh so beautiful.
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