| Title: Chapter 38: Plans Change - Part 2
| 30 Aug 2022 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Terrific, action-packed chapter! Thanks so much.
Author's Response: First and foremost, thank you for all of your comments on the chapters of this fic! I hope you enjoy the wild journey in store for Severus and Harry!
| Title: Chapter 37: Plans Change - Part 1
| 30 Aug 2022 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Oh no, what a cliffhanger! I’m very nervous. Great chapter as always.
The scenes from Severus’s previous life were really enjoyable.
Thanks for the great chapter.
I wonder how Harry will feel once he learns that Severus has been deceiving him about the state of his magical core. I hope he has a justifiable plan in place!
| Title: Chapter 33: Telling the Truth
| 30 Aug 2022 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Harry’s health has been a rollercoaster ride for sure, with some truly sweet and touching moments interwoven. I loved Dumbledore’s thoughts at the end.
Thanks for including a compelling motivation for the rat. I really like that Dudley has a positive role here!
Oh Severus. He must have been too exhausted to remember a silencing spell.
| Title: Chapter 30: A Hurdle in the Road
| 29 Aug 2022 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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What an intense scene and an emotional step back into Severus’s previous life. I didn’t even notice Dobby’s syntax!
| Title: Chapter 29: Getting Closer
| 29 Aug 2022 5:02 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Such an intense read so far! The plot is thickening. I hope they find the leak and that Severus continues to make progress on putting the puzzle pieces together.
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