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Reviews For Harry Of Bainbridge
maybe once snape grows to like harry he'll feel ashamed of how automatically he hated harry and how cruelly he treated him from the get-go and how he baldly said to harry's face that he didn't want him and never would have asked for him
i bet snape thinks that millie has been giving harry the donuts i don't think even snape is so unreasonable as to think that harry should be expected to buy pastries for him AND buy his own clothes all the same, it's fucked up of snape for harry to ask for trainers, a basic clothing item, and snape to deny him
i bet snape thinks that millie has been giving harry the donuts i don't think even snape is so unreasonable as to think that harry should be expected to buy pastries for him AND buy his own clothes all the same, it's fucked up of snape for harry to ask for trainers, a basic clothing item, and snape to deny him
maybe once snape grows to like harry he'll feel ashamed of how automatically he hated harry and how cruelly he treated him from the get-go and how he baldly said to harry's face that he didn't want him and never would have asked for him
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I really enjoyed this story, it felt genuine and realistic. You wrote a Harry that was a good kid, not the one that is typically written about. I don't like that kid but I do like yours. Your Severus was in character, making assumptions and accusations without letting Harry explain. I liked how Harry didn't even bother defending himself, the way he felt made perfect sense as well as his running away. I felt horrible for a kid who doesn't even try to explain. Just takes it and keeps his mouth shut. A really emotional story with a satisfying ending. |
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