That was a really sweet chapter. I love how Severus is showing Harry comfort in small and believable ways. Harry’s emotions and fears around others were realistically tumultuous and well-described. I always appreciate when Snape comes off the victor when going toe-to-toe with Sirius!
This was a wonderfully angsty chapter. You’ve captured Harry’s younger body and physical reactions so well, even as you’ve skillfully retained his teenage reasoning capabilities. Thanks so much for this great chapter.
This is so good! It’s gripping and suspenseful. I like how you’ve portrayed Snape and Harry as well.
This is an amazing start to your story. Harry’s feelings are so palpable, and now Snape is here. I hope that Snape can sort the two boys out, and take note of what Harry’s living situation is really like.
| Title: Chapter 25
| 30 Jul 2022 3:19 pm
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| Reviewer: dex (Signed)
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Wonderful!!! Thank you for sharing!
Brilliant!
I really loved reading this.
This was a fantastic story. I typically avoid de-aging stories, but this one was an exception.
It was all very sweet.
The ending was rather abrupt and feels like yoi just needed to end it, but i appreciate you concluding it instead of abandoning.
This was so good it made me make an account for this site. Your writing and portrayal of Harry was one of the finest I've ever read. Thank you for such an amazing fic. I had an amazing time reading it :)
| Title: Chapter 25
| 06 May 2021 3:17 pm
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This is way too cute!!! I'm so excited to rush off to read the sequel too, but I just wanted to leave a note to let you know just how much I enjoyed this. I love that Harry's thoughts were almost a combination of his 15 year old self and his 6 year old self, and that you showed the confusion there. I really enjoyed Sirius Lupin and Snape coming to a bit of an understanding, and more than anything I loved how you handled Harry taking back power for himself after years of being a pawn of multiple people. Just excellent all around!
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