Nice chapter! It was great seeing more of Harry’s new reality in this story by meeting Severus’s extended family. I really like the dynamic that Harry is developing with Iris. It feels like there’s so much potential there. And, of course, looking forward to Harry’s upcoming visit to Hogwarts and Dumbledore’s reaction to all this.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It is greatly appreciated. I really enjoy writing Harry with a sibling in this story, I get to play with new ideas and such. Enjoy the next chapter!
| Title: My Little Boy
| 08 Mar 2021 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Really interesting story! I hope Severus confronts Dumbledore, there's no way he didn't know about all this. Also, Im so worried for Harry after his meeting with Petunia. I don't know why but I have a feeling she'll try to con him into saying he lied or something so that the charges can be dropped. Anyway, can't wait to see the next update!
Author's Response: I guess we'll find out what happens! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
| Title: My Little Boy
| 07 Mar 2021 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating. I love how Severus is interacting with Harry. You are showing how he was deprived in such a subtle way such as never learning to swing, it is building up a very gooopicture of Harry, thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I quite like writing this Severus, he's different from my usual ones in my other stories. Thanks for reading.
This is a lovely story. Harry and Iris are such appealing characters, and a patient Snape is very well described. Look forward to seeing how Petunia and Dunbledore are dealt with.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving kind words. Update coming soon!
I really like what you’ve done with Severus, his character gives off such a calm loving vibe and I really enjoy reading it
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Great chapter! I’m looking forward to the visit with Petunia, and whether it will prove to be a breakthrough moment for Severus and Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
| Title: Regrets
| 08 Feb 2021 8:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely chapter thank you. I love Irisbshe is so spirited
Author's Response: Iris is a fun one to write. And I think we will be hearing from Petunia and Dumbledore soon enough!
| Title: Take Me Home
| 08 Feb 2021 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, and poor Severus. I think Dumbledore and Petunia have some explaining to do. Thank you for updating your wonderful story
Interesting! I also really like how you’ve shown Petunia displaying a measure of affection for Harry in a way that still demeans him and “keeps him in his place”, so to speak, below her own family. It also makes sense that Harry, at such a young age, would identify with what he knows and is valued for at the Dursleys and would want to go back. I also like the sibling addition. Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a kind review! I am so glad you are enjoying this story!
| Title: You're Not Leaving
| 29 Jan 2021 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, you do have a good grasp on how an abused child will react. I think Dumbledore will have something to say to this, I’m looking forward to that confrontation.
Author's Response: He'll be coming into the picture soon enough. Thanks for reading!
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