Off to a great start. Umbridge is going to be real fright.
I keep coming back and re-reading this story, and every time I get to this last chapter I finally remember that it's completed and then I sit here so sad.
I know it's been a little while since you last updated but I have to try at least.
Is there any chance you're going to perhaps finish this story? I keep daydreaming about the rest of it, and I just... I need to know what happens. I have a small inkling of what may come, but I'm more than likely wrong.
I just need to know! This story is SO AMAZING. I am just in love with Severus and Harry's relationship. Severus fell right in to being a parental figure for Harry and it was so... natural. You almost didn't notice it happening. But then you see him brushing his finger soothing down the bridge of Harry's nose and it just comes back to the forefront of your mind.
Anyways, I just wanted to make sure you knew you had fans who still enjoy this story and are eagerly awaiting new chapters should the inspiration be there.
Umm, ok yeah that's it. Take care!
This is perhaps one of the best chapters, so heart worming and realistic…. I love that you showed how this also affects Snape not only harry…. And I really like where you’re going with this (your take on fifth year is really unique)
I hope you are doing well. I have loved every chapter of this story and I check everyday for an update. Crossing my fingers it's not abandoned.
| Title: Chapter 21
| 10 Aug 2021 5:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sorry about the flu I hope you feel better soon.
An excellent chapter with a wonderful ending. Part of me wants the horcrux to have a go at Umbridge but it might like her! Severus had better come to the rescue soon. Thank you for updating.
What a cliffhanger! Six year old Harry with an adult Horcrux on board that he's thinking of letting out.
oh, I love how you write Harry's PSTD, as it was so glossed over in canon, (sort of, I mean I guess he was quite angry) and it's just so REAL. I'm sooo excited for the next chapter, stupid Umbridge is back again!! I'm glad that you've recovered from the flu, hope you're feeling much better now!!!
Really hope you update soon 🤞
| Title: Chapter 20
| 15 Jul 2021 5:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. I love it when Severus becomes caring and gentle with Harry
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