Nice chapter, though I hope Snape recognizes that Harry was just trying to get some help with his shoulder.
Oh God! Cliffhanger!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 9 The Trouble That Edward Bear Caused
| 29 Apr 2021 7:54 pm
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| Title: Chapter 9 The Trouble That Edward Bear Caused
| 27 Apr 2021 12:00 am
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Yep, definitely sending Severus a howler.
| Title: Chapter 8 Swingers
| 21 Apr 2021 8:52 pm
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I think I remember reading somewhere that it was in the North West, so a Manchester code might be appropriate.
A good mixture of Severus being kind and harsh, but I don’t think he will like books treated this way. Thank you for updating.
I love the image of Severus teaching Harry to swing, and so good that he bought Harry birthday presents. Hoping this heralds the turning of the tide for them.
https:// postal-code. co .uk/postcode/Shropshire Just remove the spaces and it will take you to a website where you can point and click on a map and it will give you the address and the postcode for anywhere in the world (it seems). The address I gave you will take you directly to Shrewsbury, Shropshire.
Very good chapter! I can't wait for more! Poor Harry, he's trying so hard!
| Title: Chapter 7 Home, Sweet Home
| 14 Apr 2021 7:19 pm
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Poor Harry, it must be bad to want to go to the Dursley’s house
Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 7 Home, Sweet Home
| 14 Apr 2021 3:44 pm
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Thanks for another well written chapter. I hope Severus realizes sooner rather than later just how much emotional and psychological (not to mention physical) damage he’s inflicting on Harry. He’s losing Harry’s trust in him and reinforcing Harry’s fear of authority figures more generally, and I hope he wisens up before it’s too late.
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