Loved it
Author's Response: thank you!!
What a great chapter. I loved the cliffhanger ending and am so looking forward to seeing how Severus handles this unexpected revelation in the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you!!!
ME ENCANTA
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Wonderful chapter. I really hope that Severus tells Harry he’s his father soon, and better yet takes his opportunity to be one.
Author's Response: Me too!! I’m really struggling with some things right now because I wrote some things that I wanted to happen that I really like, but they wouldn’t really work with the direction I’m going in right now, so... I really don’t know what will happen next! XD thanks for your support!!
Enjoyed this one very much. I’m looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you!! :)
Great chapter in a wonderful and well-written story. I’m looking forward to the next installment, and am so pleased to hear that we won’t have to wait for long!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! <3 the next chapter is my favorite that I’ve written so far and will hopefully be posted on Saturday morning :)
I disagree its the worst story on here, its actually quite good. Yours is one of the stories I track. You are doing just fine and just need more confidence in yourself. :)
Author's Response: Awwww thank you <3
| Title: Ebullition
| 18 May 2021 9:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good ending to the chapter. Ron was wonderful in supporting Harry. Thank you for updating
Author's Response: Thank you!! <3
What a fantastic chapter. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! <3
Just to be clear. I do think that you portrayed her in the right way. I think she is little overbearing and irritating in the canon as well, and I don't like her very much. Molly in my fanfiction is kind of the same. And well you can't have all characters in your Fic sickingly sweet coz it would be boring. So she irritates me and if I rant at her behaviour again. It will mean I don't like her and she irritates me, but I don't want her any other way... Well I don't know if it makes senseXD
Author's Response: It does make sense, that’s kind of how I feel about it! Like I think there was something in the first chapter I wrote her saying and every time I read over it I roll my eyes, but I kept it in because it just felt true to her character somehow? And I do like her but she can be overbearing and all that so I think that I have kept her in character better than others but well, if I didn’t change Snape’s canon personality a bit then it would be no fun :P thank you for the support!!! <3
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