It's good:D
I love when Sevi realise how badly he treated Harry.
And bravo Ron! I love when he is a supporting friend.
Molly's behaviour is irritating, ugh. Respect should be earned, not given just because sb is a teacher or elder.
Anyway, great job:)
Author's Response: ahaha Molly irritates me too at times, I don't really know why I'm writing her that way she just seems to run away from me XD thank you for the kind words!!! <3
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| 13 May 2021 5:37 pm
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Great chapter, I think I’ve guessed what that blood sample will show! Thank you for an entertaining story
Author's Response: thank you for reading!! I'm hopeful that the next chapter will be out this weekend
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| 13 May 2021 5:14 pm
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Lovely arrival of Severus! Thank you a very well put together chapter
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| 13 May 2021 5:01 pm
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Thank you a lovely start to your story
The different points of view haven’t been confusing at all.
Another great chapter! Thanks for updating so swiftly. The switch in POV wasn’t confusing to me, but rather added more texture and nuance. I’m so looking forward to Severus receiving those blood test results! Thanks again for this wonderful story.
You’ve got me hooked. At least Your Harry has the sense to seek out healing. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you!!! :)
Absolutely brilliant! So well written, with a wry humor that made it a fantastic read. Big congrats on your first HP fanfic, and am so looking forward to more!
Author's Response: oh my gosh thank you soooo much this really made me smile! I'm glad you like it, hopefully more will be posted soon :)
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