Great start to the story. The tumult of emotion that Harry feels post-battle is palpable, and I’m really looking forward to seeing how this develops as the golden trio goes farther back in time than expected.
Author's Response: Hi cavehack,
thank you reading my story, and for sending such a nice review. I have to say, I am glad you felt what Harry was going through, it was that and characterisation that I really wanted to focus on in this chapter. It's important to set up 'your version'. I hope to have the next chapter updated soon.
thanks again
vee
|