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Soo good! Just promise us a good Dumbledore? Please?
Woah what a twist! I absolutely love your version of Snape in this story. He is so in character while still being absolutely caring and concerned. I hope Hermione is okay.
I love this! I have that song stuck in my head, "If I could turn back time..." Poor Hermione being forced along with this mad plan. Wait, is this the story where Harry and Ron end up with different families but Hermione ends up orphaned and having a hard life because of the changes? I feel like I've read this before. Anyway, I love the setup and the story's pace. Everyone is in character and the subject is very interesting. It must of been incredible to see Hogwarts intact and thriving again in the past.
This reminds me of that meme: Everyone: Harry no! Harry: Harry yes! Hahaha what did you do, Harry?! Oh dear. What a mess. Going back five or six years is a lot longer than six hours! Fantastic setup! I'm loving this story so far.
Very good subtle changes can't wait to see what is going to happen next, thank you
Dumbledore knows... and has totally told his parents.
Interesting changes! Looking forward to more. The formatiing, though, is strange - everything is single spaced.
girl you got me hooked and just left it like that 😭 🙏 Author's Response: I am trying to get a beta and find the time to finish, but it's been tough to find the time with a new job and writing my first novel. |
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