Always glad to see an update. Another excellent chapter
Terrific chapter! I simply love this story.
I'm seriously loving this story so far, your writing is so good! I feel so bad for both Holly and Severus though; their relationship is so strained and, well, broken. I just hope that they'll eventually be able to amend it together- with Harry as an addition as well.
Oh, it's so weird though you know? I'm not saying it's like bad or anything, but like; yeah, kinda bad. Scrambled, in a way, I guess. There's just so many secrets, so many things that would make me scratch my head.
The irony is so hilarious though; Lucius knows it.
I can't wait to see how Harry and Holly might see each other again and how things progress further into the story. Anticipating your future updates!
Really enjoying this and looking forward to more.
I LOVE this chapter. It os great, your style of writting is just magnificent. I hope you continue soon.
| Title: That Old Chestnut
| 06 Oct 2021 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear! I feel the quotation “Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we start to deceive” sums up the actions of Dumbledore here.
Very good chapter I loved Narcissa’s rant.
I’m looking forward to Harry and Holly reuniting, and Snape connecting all the puzzle pieces!
Amazing chapter. It bubbles and churns with vitality. Your story is so easy to feel and get lost in.
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