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Reviews For No Bed of Roses
Author's Response: Hopefully the consequences live up to expectations. I'm glad my next chapter is an eager after work event 😁
Wow! A great chapter, Hogsmead has never been like this in cannon. Poor Harry always on the wrong end of a wand. Thank you for updating. Author's Response: Well, there just has to be some sort of incident that will cause chaos amongst them all and it had to be this one
Poor kid can't get a break, and he isn't even the focus of most of this chapter! Oof! Absolutely mean cliffhanger to put there at the end, but the writer in me applauds your cruelty. I very much look forward to the next chapter. Especially since I don't know what the spell is Umbridge used on Harry. Author's Response: Umbridge's spell will be revealed in the next chapter. Harry would sacrifice himself to protect Holly, especially from Draco's idiocy. And I'm glad you recognise, as a fellow writer, that if there were no cliffhangers, how would you know if your readers were even paying attention for wanting more??
I love this story soo much. Please post again soon! Author's Response: Well, someone had to take it and poor Harry drew the short straw
I'm not sure why, but there seems to be a strange formatting issue for this chapter. It's making it very hard to read. It looks like everything was written with the each sentence being It's own long paragraph or something. It's making it so it won't all fit on the page. :( Author's Response: I've tried to delete the chapter and re-add it, but unfortunately, it didn't work. It's incredibly frustrating and I can't guarantee it won't happen on the next chapter
I have just read the new chapter but formatting was a little weird and nowhere to leave a review! great chapter with lots of my favourite characters, and the ending is hilarious. I'll leave a review there when I can Author's Response: I've tried to delete the chapter and re-add it but unfortunately it didn't work. Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
I liked the beginning with Regulus and the PI, and it's good to see some sort of continuation in regards to the search to save Harry and the sass of the PI was funny. I also liked the little check in we got on Dudley. It's nice that he's come such a long way. Lastly, as per usual, it's always funny to see the people new to working out try to get into fitness, particularly the people who refuse to take it seriously, like Draco. Author's Response: I'm trying to take fitness seriously myself, lol and trying to stay consistent. It's soooooo hard and Draco will learn that too. I didn't expect the PI and her connection to Eileen but when I was writing Regulus's pov it just all came tumbling out.
Lovely mixture of characters in this chapter and a very interesting insight into Eileen/Iris and how she stayed in the muggle world, thank you so much Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't expect Constance to have the background she did, but here she is, revealing herself as Eileen's silent supporter.
Absolutely amazing! The best work I read in many many months <3 I can't wait to see how it continues and how Severus and Harry (I hope) will start liking each other (someday) Holly is absolutely sweetheart <3 Author's Response: Thank you - your review means alot 😁 |
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