Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 07 Dec 2021 2:01 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this premise. I wonder why the car broke down. Was it out of gas? Or was it Dobby again, making the car crash in Snape's backyard, in hopes that it would get Harry expelled?

    Poor George. I hope he gets healed quick. Harry is really going to feel his bruises in the morning. I wonder what Snape has in store for him.

    Good start!

    Author's Response: Ooh I hadn't thought that it might have been Dobby, but now you mention it that's a good idea... I must admit I hadn't really thought about why the car broke down. In the book it does start malfunctioning when they are flying to Hogwarts, so I suppose I just moved that up earlier.
Title: Chapter 2 07 Dec 2021 5:42 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    I find it frustrating that no one asks Harry why they did this. I get that Snape sees Harry as an irresponsible brat but Dumbledore doesn’t.

    Author's Response: At this point, after Ron's revelations the previous night, both Snape and Dumbledore know enough about Harry's home life to know the most likely reason that he was so glad to get into that car and fly away from the Dursleys. And I suppose I'm not too sure that Harry really has any kind of sophisticated reasoning behind his actions-- it all happened very quickly and it was a chance to get away, so he took it. I do see your point about Dumbledore, though, it might have been more in character for him to ask.
Title: Chapter 2 07 Dec 2021 1:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoyable chapter - thanks for posting!

    Author's Response: thank you :)
Title: Chapter 2 07 Dec 2021 12:26 am
Reviewer: raidyn (Signed) [Report This]
    also, Snape and his whole "loOOK UP" spiel- would have had me breaking down with tears, I would NOT be able to handle that jeez

    Author's Response: hahaha Snape is very good at being intense, he's had a lot of practice. I think here he's in an interesting confluence of emotions-- angry, a bit resentful, shocked at such sheer recklessness, maybe he was a bit scared at what might have happened-- and really I think he is entirely aware of what could have happened to Harry and the Weasleys. He does live in a muggle town after all, and would be familiar with car crashes.
Title: Chapter 2 07 Dec 2021 12:20 am
Reviewer: raidyn (Signed) [Report This]
    early chapter hell yeah!!! cannot wait for more

    Author's Response: :) glad you are enjoying it
Title: Chapter 1 02 Dec 2021 1:45 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    feel like snape should always say something about sleeping and can use the bathroom whenever

    Author's Response: I'm not sure Snape would be thinking about that-- at this point he's not exactly welcoming Harry into his house. He's basically being forced by unforeseen circumstances to put up an unwanted guest, and it is the middle of the night and he just wants to get back to bed.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Dec 2021 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start to a very original story. Thank you

    Author's Response: :) thank you too for the review
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2021 6:33 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    An amusing and well written start.

    Author's Response: aaw thank you that's good to hear :)
Title: Chapter 1 28 Nov 2021 8:28 pm
Reviewer: raidyn (Signed) [Report This]
    cant wait for more :)

    Author's Response: :) that's good to hear
Title: Chapter 1 28 Nov 2021 8:20 am
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    ¡Me encanta esta historia, es genial, sigue pronto!

    Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, will be updating next week I think.

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