| Title: A Part To Play
| 12 Dec 2021 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely warm feeling about the family, what a contrast to Severus. Poor Harry so desperate for a family he will take even a pretend one. Thank you for updating your excellent story
| Title: The Deal
| 12 Dec 2021 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant start thank you
Me encanta!! Me gusta mucho como va tu historia
LOVE this premise! Please update soon!!
You’ve got me curious. Harry has a tough job here especially with Snape constantly criticizing his performance.
Thanks for another lovely chapter!
Setting up to be an interesting plot... I suppose we'll learn more about just why Snape has to produce a son for his family later on. It seems like he lied about it before... I wonder why.
I know the family is magical but I was thinking about it and it would be interesting if Snape had to find a son for his muggle family... maybe I'll write that sometime. But in any case am looking forward to reading more. You are a very prolific author, I must say, so I don't doubt more will be coming!
Terrific start to this story! I absolutely love the premise, and can’t wait to see how this all goes!
I like this already! Not surprising considering I love your other fics. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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