I really enjoyed your short tale! That was quite an adventurous chapter with some unsavory characters that dripped with evil. I loved the last line of your story, and am excited to read your sequel. Hats off for writing this and the sequel, while caring for your baby. Thanks again for your story, and I’m looking forward to what’s ahead!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 18 Nov 2022 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely long chapter!
I love how Severus is looking after Harry but at the same time not wanting to and forgetting about him.
An unusual introduction to the magical world for Harry but a wonderful one thank you so much
im loving this fic so much already, youve no idea. every ch gets better n better, i cant wait to read more! ;)
I love the addition of Tagalog and the history you share about the real Rice Bowl! Your Snape is unique and well done. Thanks for the nice update.
interesting story n premise so far, cannot wait to read more!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 12 Nov 2022 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I loved seeing Severus dealing with the nurses and doctors
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Nov 2022 9:25 pm
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Love this story. You give so much detail and the way you get into Harry’s mind is wonderful thank you
Since there isn’t a kudos button on P and S, I will just say kudos on this chapter. Harry must be so confused by Snape’s behavior. Hopefully Snape will clue him into magic soon. I had to google Steve Vai too and I see the resemblance.
Nicely written interaction between Harry and Severus.
The driving bit is funny! Sadly, I had to look up Steve Vai, but he’s spot on Snape. Thanks for the great update, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your story develops from here.
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