WOW un capítulo genial, sigue pronto, me ha encantado y estoy deseando saber cómo progresa esa relación entre los dos.
I love the idea of Harry becoming Umbridge’s nightmare-ish student.
While Sprout now knows to stop the Hufflepuffs, McGonagall still seems blind as to what’s going on in her own house.
Gah, the more I read this story, the happier I get and the more intriguing it gets. Now I need to re-read everything up to this chapter, just to give myself something to do.
Thank you for this wonderful story!
I really enjoyed reading about Harry’s attempts at subterfuge, even as I did so with bated breath. His efforts were inspired and amusing. Umbridge’s use of Filch was clever. The chapter end was terrific and feels like it’s setting the stage for the “great Harry and Snape stuff” ahead! It’s interesting to see how Snape keeps rationalizing away his observations of Harry’s behavior. Your author’s note has me excited for what’s in store! Thanks so much for these great chapters.
I loved learning more about the blueprints of a rebellion and why the Ministry has been on a smear campaign. It’s brilliant, though I hope that Harry maneuvers carefully enough not to get caught at whatever it is that he wants to do. I liked the experiment in the stacks, and Ron’s approach to the Puffs. I hope that Sprout reins them in. Thanks for the great chapter, and so happy that there’s another chapter to enjoy ahead!
Lol, que suerte la mía. 🤭 Acababa de leer el capítulo 12* justo cuando subes los otros.
Por cierto, está es una gran historia, me tienes pegada al teléfono esperando actualización y releyendo los capítulos.
Ahh no! I caught up. Lovely story and can't wait for the next update.
I don't ind the descriptions as it adds a depth to the overall story.
| Title: A Chance Encounter On Diagon Alley
| 16 Nov 2022 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed)
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Omg, the end of this is freaking fantastic. I koved that Snape/Vernon interaction.
This story is great so far!
I’m surprised Snape doesn’t tell the Hufflepuffs off for having an unauthorized pin on their school uniform. Hermione wasn’t happy in cannon when Harry did better than her in potions, but is taking it much better now that there’s a legitimate reason for his success.
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