There was so much to love in this chapter. It makes perfect sense to warn Harry and his classmates about known dangers at the school - that’s the responsible thing for the professors to do, and should have happened in canon. The library nook was amazing - the space, the view, and of course your wonderful visual. Thanks for that! It was also quite poignant for Harry to finally experience the understanding of his friends. That moment put his experiences thus far into perspective. Thanks for this chapter and I’m hoping that Harry maintains the resolve he felt at the chapter’s end! Big thanks again for this wonderful story.
This chapter was amazing, and he imagine of the library was trully great. Continue soon, I can't wait to see Snape reaction to Harry's real life.
Thx for writting this!
Once again a lovely story from you. Thank you!
| Title: Student Apprentice
| 13 Nov 2022 7:06 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for the wonderful picture, it really brought the story to life.
| Title: Dungeon Brewing
| 13 Nov 2022 6:43 am
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Thank you an interesting chapter, especially the encounter with Umbridge
I don't suppose you could come to my house to make a nook like this? Oh, well.
Author's Response: Haha, I can make one for you in Sims 4 or Fortnite Creative, but that's about it :p Otherwise you'll just have to spend a lot of time in this literary nook with Harry.
| Title: Dungeon Brewing
| 12 Nov 2022 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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Oh boy! Umbrage! I can’t wait to see how Snape reacts to her detentions.
Jam-packed with a plethora of details! I felt as if I were right there beside Harry as he struggled to assimilate all the new aspects of his apprenticeship and how they pertained to his position at Hogwarts. And Unbridged to boot... 😳
Thanks for the wonderfully long and eventful chapter! I was beyond pleased to see the new chapter posted. I wonder what change in circumstances will be needed in order to allow Severus to gain more patience and compassion for Harry. Severus seems as irritable and short-tempered as ever - very in-character, though sad to see. I love how Harry’s apprenticeship will change his rules of engagement with a certain odious toad! The potion making aspects in this chapter were great fun to read. Thanks very much for this wonderful update!
I have enjoyed reading this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. =0)
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