Thank you soooooooo much for this.
Thank you thank you thank you! This is such a great ending! I truly appreciate that you gave us more!
Aw! Thank you so much for adding a chapter. This makes me feel so much better.
I usually don't complain about the author's choice for a story's ending, and I feel bad for having done so, but I really appreciate that you took our disappointments in mind and added this. Thank you!
| Title: Bring Down the House
| 24 Jan 2023 5:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating and tying in the loose ends. I think you have got it just right, Severus and Harry have too much history to easily relate to each other, but your ending gives that hope. I love the family and how they relate to the Malfoys. The picture of Lucius carrying around a muggle baby will stay with me for a long time!
This was a lovely and needed ending! Thanks so much for wrapping up the loose threads and giving us hope through this chapter. I’m so happy that there may be a sequel!
Me encantaba esta historia, cuando dijiste que quedaba un episodio pensé, bueno... sus capítulos son largos, lo conseguirá cerrar todo. Quizá por eso esté tan decepcionada con este, siento que al final de todo, la historia no consiguió avanzar, no sabemos nada de ninguno y había muchas cosas por cerrar. Si decides hacer una secuela estaría bien, porque te permitirá aclarar todo, sino... simplemente me quedaré con que es una historia incompleta, porque así se siente.
Escritura maravillosa eso sí y buena forma de narrar. Siento escribirte en español pero si bien entiendo el idioma, me es difícil expresarme en él.
Loved this story and Snape’s family. If your muse strikes and you want to I agree that a sequel would be lovely.
I really enjoyed reading this story! I liked the fact the Snape did not undergo any drastic changes in his relationships (that would be too fake). I look forward to reading your other works.
Disappointing ending, but otherwise a nice story. It's understandable that Dumbledore would mistrust Remus after learning about his lying by omission. Beatrice didn't seem concerned about Snape at all, unless part of her letter is omitted. I like how Harry was oblivious to what the rest of the Snapes knew. I hope you eventually write a sequel, even if it's just a chapter or two.
I’ve really enjoyed this.
I sincerely hope you’re inspired to write a sequel one day.
Happy 2023.
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