Thanks for this swift update! I’m so glad that Maya was honest with her mother, and I’m looking forward to seeing how things come to a head. I was somewhat surprised by Alfred’s perspective, as Severus was a teenager who had lost his mother and lived through trauma when he moved in with Nana. So I would have expected more compassion from Alfred, though I suppose that Snape hasn’t helped his situation in the intervening years. I’m curious about who will confront Harry and how Severus will respond. Thanks for the update and I’m looking forward to reading on!
I love this story. Your original characters are like real people which makes the story more interesting. I’m disappointed when I come to the end of the chapter even though the chapters are quite long. I’m that interested in what happens next. An excellent story all around.
Oh Nana knows all. Such a twist, I love it! And Maya's seen him, how will everyone else that take. What is Snapes reaction to the books? What will he have to say to Harry?!?!
I’m loving everything about this.
Me ha encantado el capĂtulo! Sigue pronto por favor!!
| Title: A Hard Act to Follow
| 28 Dec 2022 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an amazing chapter. I love Nana, she is so crafty.
I’m enjoying this so much! The nighttime conversation with Nana was great. I also really liked the exchange of gifts, the friendly family banter, and how Harry conveyed his keen insights about Snape. I wonder who Maya will reveal her observation to, and what will come of that! Thanks so much for the wonderful update.
I knew Grammy was faking!!! Lmao I bet everyone else knows too. I’m so invested, can’t wait for more!!
| Title: Get into the Groove
| 26 Dec 2022 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I’m enjoying your story. Harry is such a good person. I hope Snape gets with the program like the rest of his family. Plus Nana would definitely be sorted into Slytherin!
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