Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Master Snape 02 Feb 2023 10:03 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this nerdy version of Snape.

    “She ran an assessment. The ingredients she found were weird.”

    “Excellent.” Snape said.

    Oh so in character and fun! And yes, when Harry explains his actions out loud they do sound stupid.

    I loved this line, Snape rubbed his temples and wished for strength for himself and a brain for Potter.

    I love Snape's wit in this. Fantastic setup, lovely bantering and development. A delight to read.

    Author's Response: Aw thank you Jan, this is such a nice comment. I hope you stick around for the rest of the story. <3 <3
Title: Master Snape 02 Feb 2023 12:30 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    And Snape was looking forward to a quiet week back at Hogwarts...
Title: Master Snape 02 Feb 2023 12:30 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    And Snape was looking forward to a quiet week back at Hogwarts...

    Author's Response: Yeah Snape isn't going to get that but I certainly sympathized with his desire to have a nice quiet week.
Title: Master Snape 01 Feb 2023 4:28 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really fun and fascinating! I’m looking forward to seeing how this master-servant relationship goes. Thanks for updating.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words--fun and fascinating (with a dose of angst) is exactly what I was going for.
Title: The Draught of Asphodel 30 Jan 2023 2:11 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Title: The Draught of Asphodel 27 Jan 2023 11:44 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is not good for Harry at all! I wonder if the draught was given to him on purpose. I also wonder why no one has questioned Dung. Thank goodness for Hermione. I’m looking forward to the Harry-Snape interaction that will come from all this.

    Author's Response: Harry is going to struggle for a while. Oh yes there will be plenty of Harry-Snape in the coming chapters. Thanks for reading!
Title: Back to Hogwarts 27 Jan 2023 6:17 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I suspect that Harry is being overly optimistic. Good for Hermione making him go to the hospital wing. I wonder when he would have gone otherwise. Thanks for another good chapter.

    Author's Response: Lol yes, Harry doesn't quite know what he's in for. Hermione absolutely had the right idea here.
Title: Doxy Trouble 27 Jan 2023 5:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, I wouldn’t trust Dung! I like how you’ve portrayed Harry’s everyday comfort with Grimmauld. It’s a nice start to your story.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah Dung is not...the best source for things, as Harry will learn.
Title: The Draught of Asphodel 26 Jan 2023 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yikes! Poor Harry. He's honestly really lucky that Hermione figured it out. Really lucky. If she hadn't been around, would Hrry have died before anyone else did figure it out?

    I do think Harry was well within his rights to throw stuff at the news. Nice to see realistic portrayals of a teenaged boy.

    Author's Response: If no one had figured it out then yeah he would have died. This is a very gnarly potion. Lol--I'm glad you liked him throwing stuff! He deserves to throw things after such awful news.
Title: The Draught of Asphodel 26 Jan 2023 4:25 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Author's Response: Yes, absolutely poor Harry. Thank you for reading!

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