| Title: The Draught of Asphodel
| 26 Jan 2023 4:25 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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Poor Harry. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
The next question is whether or not Mundungus knew what he had and deliberately infected Harry.
Author's Response: Hm, good question! Thanks for reading!
I'm glad to see this story on here! I've read it before but no longer have access to other fanfiction sites due to an internet filter!
Author's Response: Ulgh that's a pain! Glad you found it here!
I'm glad to see this story on here! I've read it before but no longer have access to other fanfiction sites due to an internet filter!
Author's Response: I recognized your name! Thanks for dropping by and giving it another read. Boo to internet filters!
Famous last words, I fear.
I’m hooked.
Author's Response: Aren't they just? Thanks for reading!
Oh, dear. I feel a disaster coming on.
Author's Response: Ha, you may be right! Thanks for reading :)
Nice beginning - a believable situation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Never accept anything from Fletcher. He sold me a cauldron once, and I never noticed it was incredibly thin, and tried to brew a potion. The bottom melted, and the contents made my skin erupt in boils.
Author's Response: Ouch, Draco! You learned that lesson the hard way! Never trust Mundungus :)
I accidentally skipped a sentence, and had a moment of confusion, thinking Potter shoved Longbottom's toad in his mouth. I can't get that image out of my head now.
Author's Response: Lool sounds more like something you'd do, Malfoy!
Sirius is very in character, as are McGonagall and Poppy. Well done! I'm feeling sorry for Harry. Obviously, something is not right here. Poor Harry.
I really like that you gave Poppy ways to identify potions ingredients and such. Very useful skill for a mediwitch.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah Harry's situation is only getting started, poor boy.
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