I've been checking this daily for updates and realised I hadn't done my part and reviewed to tell you that, so here goes:
This is my favourite WIP at the moment. I love the way the relationship between the characters is developing in a natural and plausible way and I adore the characterisation and the little village you've built. I am very much looking forward to the next update.
I liked how Severus worried about the trip both before and during day, and recognized that he was doing so.
| Title: Chapter 23
| 11 Jul 2023 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sounds like you had a good day along with Harry. Thank you for an excellent and amusing chapter
| Title: Chapter 22
| 11 Jul 2023 7:46 pm
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Reflective chapter good that Harry is beginning to think things through
| Title: Chapter 21
| 11 Jul 2023 7:06 pm
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Thank you I loved the bed building group
| Title: Chapter 20
| 11 Jul 2023 5:27 pm
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Thank you for working so hard to write this chapter, it can’t have been easy. I love the symbolism of the bed equaling care in this chapter, very powerful
| Title: Chapter 19
| 10 Jul 2023 8:34 pm
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I love the thought of Harry learning the pipes! He could probably blast death eaters and the ministry to raving lunatics in a few minutes!
Just wondering why Dumbledore doesn’t help them with money. Severus is doing a dangerous job for him and I’m sure he could get money to them somehow.
| Title: Chapter 18
| 10 Jul 2023 8:21 pm
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Thank you I’m always interested in the way authors explain occlumency as it is deliberately left vague in cannon.
A great chapter I love how their relationship is developing
| Title: Chapter 17
| 10 Jul 2023 8:06 pm
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Very traumatic you summed up how the muggle and magical world failed Harry so well, thank you
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