Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 15 20 Jun 2023 12:46 pm
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear! That was a great chapter but a horrible ending!!!
Title: Chapter 15 20 Jun 2023 1:11 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice transition from bucolic to terror.
Title: Chapter 15 19 Jun 2023 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! Oh no! I hope Harry doesn't down himself in guilt!
Title: Chapter 15 19 Jun 2023 9:06 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the interaction between the two boys and seeing Severus so subtly thoughtful in his own way towards Harry. It was also fun seeing their backstory being probed. I wonder if anyone will suspect that something is amiss. Thanks for updating!
Title: Chapter 15 19 Jun 2023 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed reading about the two boys going for a swim. It’s really hot here right now and I could just imagine the ocean. Thank you!
    Also, Severus’ small gestures of comfort to Harry were really well written. I liked how he tried to justify them with keeping up appearances :)
Title: Chapter 14 19 Jun 2023 11:17 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]
    I really really like your story! It’s super fun and you have a lot of unusual and new ideas when it comes to this sort of fiction where Severus saves Harry in some way for example their hike through the highlands. Also what finally made me comment this was the bagpiper! I just love it! I play the bagpipes myself and I laugh tears every time you mention him waking up the whole village. I also appreciated the backstory about the pipers in the word wars. And of course Highland Laddie is such a nice tune! My old pipe band played it for me when I had to leave them so it was just perfect in your story! Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 14 18 Jun 2023 1:22 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the feel of this chapter! It's so peaceful!
Title: Chapter 14 18 Jun 2023 1:22 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the feel of this chapter! It's so peaceful!
Title: Chapter 14 18 Jun 2023 2:28 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I can just see Harry saying in all innocence, "Hey - that was my mother's name too!"
Title: Chapter 14 17 Jun 2023 5:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Harry’s realization and the almost imperceptible way in which things have changed so significantly between him and Snape. This chapter was fun and heartwarming as they settle into a comfortable rapport with each other. Thanks so much for updating your great story!

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