Reviews For Doves and Daffodils
| Title: Chapter 11 - "Hypothetically" | 19 Oct 2023 11:54 pm |
| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) | [Report This] |
Hypothetically, Emmeline got the family into trouble.
| Title: Chapter 11 - "Hypothetically" | 19 Oct 2023 11:54 pm |
| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) | [Report This] |
Hypothetically, Emmeline got the family into trouble.
| Title: Chapter 11 - "Hypothetically" | 19 Oct 2023 4:35 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
Very good chapter. I loved the house unity over Umbridge
| Title: Chapter 10 - Hogwarts At Last | 12 Oct 2023 8:29 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- I lovedthe the teacher’s comments on Umbridge it sounded so authentic thank you so much for updating
| Title: Chapter 9 - Anticipation | 12 Oct 2023 8:15 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Loved how Lucy got on the platform! The idea of the chocolate card is brilliant thank you
| Title: Chapter 7 - Danger on Diagon | 29 Sep 2023 9:38 pm |
| Reviewer: Baiba (Signed) | [Report This] |
- I tried to wait until you finished story, huh i am too weak.
Still you are writing so well. It is like i am in every scene in your story.
You write:
"Magic." The three others responded with grins.
For example i took a pause, so i could consider in this scene how everyone told , their faces and everything.
Thank you so much!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Grave News and Grandmothers | 28 Sep 2023 5:30 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Thank you for updating. I love the Nana, a lovely person and so practical.
| Title: Chapter 7 - Danger on Diagon | 17 Aug 2023 8:13 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Thank you a brilliant chapter
| Title: Chapter 6 - Dire Tidings | 30 Jul 2023 6:33 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Thank you a very interesting chapter
| Title: Chapter 5 - The Dark Lord Will Rise Again | 18 Jul 2023 8:23 pm |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) | [Report This] |
- What a chapter! It was even more horrifying than in cannon. Well done!