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Reviews For Resonance
How far behind Severus was she at Hogwarts? Loved that Harry didn't classify as offsite. Author's Response: I did try and game this. She leaves early, which I wonder now wouldn't be a fairly common thing. Like, here your underaged magic kid just needs a few years of basic training, then you put them in a "real" school. Especially in a mixed magica/muggle family. I have her like 5 years younger... ? I can't find my notes. Let's say that. So he's a seventh year when she's second. That's a gap with no interaction in most schools. Except for the Prefects and star Quidditch players. I sort of expect by sixth year, Snape was trying to lay pretty low to avoid attention if he had fallen in with the wrong crowd both inside and outside of school. If the school is really 1000 (which the numbers don't work from the house-year level, but supposedly) then I can see the younger kids not paying much attention to the older kids in that large of a student body. That's my set of assumptions to make this work. Otherwise it doesn't work. So I can totally see this being a point of disbelief.
Nice to see Harry experiencing a of drudgery in Auror work Author's Response: I did some reading on the culture of police work so I wasn't just falling back on TV show ideas of it. But yeah, a lot of paperwork. Especially with no computer systems. The filing!
Author's Response: His power is really going places!
Author's Response: I may have accidentally wrote a story about Snape that only pretends to be about Harry.
Excellent, thank you so much, I love that Harry had the meetings, in a different way, that he had in cannon
I love the way you explore different parts of the magical world. The way relatives are included and the paperwork involved was so funny thank you Author's Response: I might not have played it up as much as I could have, but had fun with contrasting childhood Harry: I'll never ben corrupt like the Ministry is! with Adult Harry: Gosh, I could just skip all this paperwork and walk into the Minister's office and get this done... And adult Harry buckling down and just dealing with it to avoid letting his younger self down.
Thank you I love the Evan's family
Thank you a great chapter
Excellent chapter thank you |
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