Thank you for the great story. I enjoyed reading it, and you always kept me interested with the twists and turns, and your wonderful writing.

A HUGE 10+

This was an awesome story from the start to the end.  I even got teary eyed at the end for Severus.  You make us the readers feel these emotions and connect it to a point in one's life.  

Again you surprised me on how this chapter developed through the years.  I felt the years were going so fast too!!   I was surprised that you added Harry's visit to the grave site and Draco's visit to Malfoy Manor.  I didn't expect that he would give the Manor away, but I do like that he donated it to a worthy cause.  I did enjoy reading Severus perspective watching his sons grow up and leave the nest.  As always this chapter flew by as I read it.  It was over before I knew it and I was left was ....awwww.  Thanks for being a brilliant writer!!!

Wow, lots of answers to questions I had from previous chapters.  The one question, I still have is "What happened to Umbridge?"  Did she come out of her coma?  What happened to the Slytherin bullies that were mean to Draco?

I like that you would give side collection of the story.  I have a few, but I'm waiting to see what you didn't include in the story.  Thanks for bringing me into another world of HP.

Wow, I didn't see that coming with the healing process.  That was so creative!  I did feel relieved to finally find out what happened to Alexei and how he's recovering.  I understand about Alexei being stabbed by Lucius but where was Leif when Voldemort and Lucius came through the door in the Dept of Mysteries.  I really like the tender touch of Harry's parents and Narcissa giving Severus their blessing to take care of their sons.  I'm was so happy to read Narcissa did love her son, what mother wouldn't love their son. I was wondering about Sirius and I'm glad he came around.  It will take time for him to reflect and understand about how times change. 

What happened to Dumbledore and Umbridge?   What about those rotten Slytherin students that beat up on Draco, what's going to happen to them?

Draco is going through a lot with the lost of his parents.  I didn't think about his trauma.  

What happened to the marks they received from the officials who came to see a demonstration of the work which Harry and Draco replaced the Dark Mark from Severus arm to a rune?  Did the boys get accepted to the school?

It would be nice to have a backstory to Severus, Leif and Alexei.  How they came together and bring it to the beginning of this story.

I know it's early to ask but when is the next chapter up!!  It would be nice to read about them returning to Prince Manor and seeing them a normal family...well creating havoc as teens seem to do.

I don't think this chapter was long enough.  I feel like it flow so quickly as I read it!

I was scared for Harry, when I heard Voldemort calling his name, I was on pins and needles, thinking get up and go look for that prophecy!  Interesting that Voldemort is wearing shoes, I know a mundane part of the story.  No love lost with Voldemort on how he wants Harry dead like Cedric, cold blooded monster!   I can't believe, after everthing Severus, Draco and Harry went through, Voldemort got the prophecy!!  I thought Harry was a goner and Draco what was he doing all this time, Harry was in agony and how the heck did Severus come back from the dead!!!  I didn't see that coming with Severus, Draco and Harry magic reaching out to the prophecy, then exploding!  A lot of magic flowing from the threesome to Voldemort.  Voldemort got it in the end.  Justice was served!  A very nice touch to the ending!!!!!  I can't wait to see what happens now!!!! Ok, I'm waiting for the fluffy part, they deserve it!  So much tension, I could breath now!  I had to read it a couple of times!!!  AWESOME a perfect 10+!

Noooo....why the cruel cliffhanger!!!!!

-thunk head on laptop-

I'm glad that you retraced back to Severus, Leif  and Alexei at Hogwarts.  I was mesmerized reading how they got to the Ministry.  I knew it, Draco calling Severus but it was apparition.  Hmmm...I wondered why he couldn't have apparate from Hogwarts to the Ministry.  Then Voldemort draining Harry's magic.  Where is Leif?  Don't let Alexei die!  Then the ending with Severus taking out Lucius...WHY???  I mean couldn't you have Severus push him into the veil???  What's happening to them getting the prophecy????  I know you said this was a long chapter but it didn't seem like it.  When I reach the end of the chapter, I thought that went by quick.  I hope the next chapter will be out SOON!!!

I did go back to reread it!

Also, I like the chapters with numbers and giving them a title would be a good idea too!