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Title: Wild Side 16 Jul 2024 8:59 am
Reviewer: DonnaNoble (Signed) [Report This]

    Mr Fowler having 8 year olds read Shakespeare is insane. Why??? And to have Harry and Snowdrop read that scene is even crazier. I'm not going to lie though, I cheered for Snowdrop when she spat. Sorry Harry. 

    Harry wants to be a farmer so badly. 

    It was only a matter of time before they had a car wreck. I hope they're okay. Harry was leaned up between the seats so he might get a face of glass. I'm sure he had his seatbelt on. I hope his eggs and milk aren't spilled. He works so hard to try to provide for himself and Severus that it would kill him not to be able to pull his weight. Car repairs are expensive too. Hopefully magic can fix it. 

Title: Part II: Harrtholomew and the Oobleck 15 Jul 2024 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    I love the way the story goes from high drama in the graveyard to black humour when the potion exploded. Thank you so much for the extra update 

Title: Part II: Harrtholomew and the Oobleck 14 Jul 2024 10:34 am
Reviewer: DonnaNoble (Signed) [Report This]

    An early update!  Yay! On one hand it's not okay that Snape legilimizes Harry, but on the other hand it's hilarious. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I look forward to seeing how motor oil interacts with the potion. 

Title: Part II: Harrtholomew and the Oobleck 13 Jul 2024 4:04 pm
Reviewer: krosi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, as Fanfiction has been down for the week on my end at least, I will post my review here. This was an excellent chapter capturing Harry’s emotions of people he never really knew or understood. The memorial was an excellent touch to give Harry a view of the family he never had. I also like Harry’s continued struggle of what to call his relationship with Severus. And the potion mess—how awful but hilarious at the same time, with Severus cursing to the high heavens over it! That was great. Though not so much for Severus as now they still have no successful potion. Thanks so much for the update, cannot wait for the next!
Title: Part I: Aethlingworth 11 Jul 2024 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    A brilliant chapter thank you. I wonder if they are going to go past the war memorial that would bring Harry's parents to life but may be too upsetting 

Title: Part I: Aethlingworth 10 Jul 2024 8:25 am
Reviewer: DonnaNoble (Signed) [Report This]

    It's very interesting to see how Harry perceives Snape's emotional state and behaviors. I'm looking forward to second part of this chapter. 

Title: Get Up 03 Jul 2024 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Very deep chapter thank you. Both of them misunderstand each other but I wonder if Severus ever stops to think about how he is hurting Harry by not engaging with him on an emotional level. 

Title: Get Up 03 Jul 2024 8:54 am
Reviewer: DonnaNoble (Signed) [Report This]

    Come on Snape- be a good brother! 

Title: Holy Diver 27 Jun 2024 11:14 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you. I love the backstory of Severus's parents and grandparents. I think that Harry is feeling as alone here as was at the Dursleys, Severus is taking care of his needs and education but, he is holding back on the emotional connection and support and Harry is still dealing with the years of abuse and deprivation. 

    I love this story so much and feel so invested in the characters you have created, thank you

Title: The Poisoned Yew 18 Jun 2024 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Wonderful discussion with Severus and Gammy. I think Harry does need stability and a routine to ground him and it's wonderful that he's getting it. Thank you for updating 


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