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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Mr Fowler having 8 year olds read Shakespeare is insane. Why??? And to have Harry and Snowdrop read that scene is even crazier. I'm not going to lie though, I cheered for Snowdrop when she spat. Sorry Harry. Harry wants to be a farmer so badly. It was only a matter of time before they had a car wreck. I hope they're okay. Harry was leaned up between the seats so he might get a face of glass. I'm sure he had his seatbelt on. I hope his eggs and milk aren't spilled. He works so hard to try to provide for himself and Severus that it would kill him not to be able to pull his weight. Car repairs are expensive too. Hopefully magic can fix it.
I love the way the story goes from high drama in the graveyard to black humour when the potion exploded. Thank you so much for the extra update
An early update! Yay! On one hand it's not okay that Snape legilimizes Harry, but on the other hand it's hilarious. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I look forward to seeing how motor oil interacts with the potion.
A brilliant chapter thank you. I wonder if they are going to go past the war memorial that would bring Harry's parents to life but may be too upsetting
It's very interesting to see how Harry perceives Snape's emotional state and behaviors. I'm looking forward to second part of this chapter.
Very deep chapter thank you. Both of them misunderstand each other but I wonder if Severus ever stops to think about how he is hurting Harry by not engaging with him on an emotional level.
Come on Snape- be a good brother!
Thank you. I love the backstory of Severus's parents and grandparents. I think that Harry is feeling as alone here as was at the Dursleys, Severus is taking care of his needs and education but, he is holding back on the emotional connection and support and Harry is still dealing with the years of abuse and deprivation. I love this story so much and feel so invested in the characters you have created, thank you
Wonderful discussion with Severus and Gammy. I think Harry does need stability and a routine to ground him and it's wonderful that he's getting it. Thank you for updating |
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