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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Severus really shouldn't legilimize Harry but every time he does it's so funny. Harry's so cute in his fantasies. Severus is not going to send his ward to Hogwarts uneducated. Harry's going to know his fractions, spelling, and how to make ethical decisions. I am sure it's painful for Snape to talk about his role in the Potters' deaths, but he's doing it for Harry. He's a good Kuya. And I appreciate him recognizing that Harry was fixating on the Exxon Valdez. I'm guessing the Weasleys are here.
Horcrux vs Sacrament. An interesting showdown to be sure. I'm not Catholic but I'm fairly certain that you aren't supposed to obliviate the priest after confession. I suppose Severus would know better than me. I'm surprised we don't see the scene where Harry and Snape talk about Snow being Toby's daughter. I understand that we wouldn't see the scenes Harry wasn't privy to, but I imagine the two must have talked about the news. It's clear from the car ride that everyone is on the same page. Tobias has a lot of nerve being upset that Snow is C of E and goes by Hill. The girl clearly got his intellect. Hopefully that's all she got from him. I would read any and all side stories you write for this piece!
I would have loved to be a fly on the wall for Severus's confession, no wonder the good father looked a little disturbed. Tobias is becoming an interesting character instead of just a hindrance to Severus and Harry. By the way, Good Friday is a bank holiday in the UK and schools break up for the Easter holiday before this day. Thank you for updating. Author's Response: I?m hoping to do a lot with Toby in the course of the rest of the series, and it?s hard to believe that he wasn?t at least a bit clever given Snape?s own level of genius lol Oh damn! I knew I must have been missing something! Now that you say so I feel like I definitely should have known that they should be off school. Thank you!
Did Severus make confession and then obliviate Father Pearson? Nice twist on Tobias. Author's Response: Lmao! Yes! He did xD Thabk you!
Great chapter! I loved the interplay between the muggle and wizarding worlds. Snape, as usual, was written brilliantly - subordinate to his altruistic father, ha! Arthur was on the nose too. And then to have Hsrry realize what he means to Severus - perfect! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I so appreciate your readership, Blue!
Oh Harry, poor little guy. First a panic attack now about to sob. He's finally getting it that Snape cares about him. I hope he and Severus have a nice hug and chat. I like the idea of Harry meeting the Weasleys. This Snape is lucky to has missed the twins. I can't believe you didn't give us more scenes about the revelation about Snow and Tobias! I know it'll come though. I'm so impatient! I can't wait to see how that conversation happens with Severus and how things change between Severus and Snow. Thank you for your prayers! Author's Response: I hate to admit this, but I didn?t write the scene of things being revealed to Severus! He actually didn?t know (which comes out later in a discussion between Harry and Severus), but I?ve now had so many people ask that I think I?ll write the scene from Snape?s POV and post it as a oneshot. (I?m considering making a separate fic that is basically vignettes from other perspectives that take place during the events of the main timeline, posted as needed for clarity or just for extra fun for readers). The big reason I didn?t write it was because I imagined this was one of the few times where they actually (for once) managed to have an adult conversation behind closed doors and with Harry successfully barred from overhearing it and the fallout.
I'm sure most of your readers don't know how to change the oil, you did fine! Thank you an excellent chapter and Arthur Weasley was a joy. Thank you so much Author's Response: lol thank you! I?m always worried about getting a review that?s like ?hey! You don?t change oil that way!? Haha I really really enjoyed writing Arthur, especially because it?s a peek of the broader wizarding world that we don?t get as much of in this fic. Of course, in the rest of the series (to be written) Harry will be at Hogwarts and we?ll get that angle, but I feel like this fic was enormously important for setting the stage for what?s to come and how things in this universe will be fundamentally different
Thank you for brining out what you have been hinting at for a few chapters. I'm not sure what the dynamics will be in the family now and of course how Severus will react. Thank you so much for your regular updates, I really look forward to Tuesdays
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