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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Called it. I feel so bad for Snow. Someone please get this child therapy. The girl clearly needs help managing and expressing her feelings. Throwing in this drama isn't going to make it easier. At least she has Harry. Of course Snape knows. He has since the nativity play. I think it's why he's been amenable to her being around so much and why he brings the kids cookies. It's his way of helping. I am not excited for Toby to be in Snow's life, but am glad that Snape and Harry have greater ties now. One day there will be a blowout between Papagema and Snape and it'll be so powerful that the earth will shake off it's axis. Also- fyi: I live in LA and while I'm safe this past week had been utter insanity. Rereading this fic over the last few days has been a great way to relax and focus on something besides the fires. Your writing really helped me out! Author's Response: You did indeed call it! One of the first ;) Holy cow, I?m so grateful to hear that you?re alright! I hope this won?t offend, but you and your family will specifically be in my prayers, in addition to the rest of LA. I can?t claim to be able to even imagine what you and your fellow Angelenos are experiencing right now, but my heart is aching for you
What is up with Mr Fowler? He's either a very crappy teacher or a secret bad guy who is trying to send some very dark messages to his class. Maybe both. Google tells me that boggles are like barghests. Barghests certainly fit the description of what Snape and the otherkids saw. Maybe Mr Fowler is the barghest. He just traded in his scariness for bad teaching skills. Why drag a kid into a rabbit warren when you can make them read Shakespeare aloud to the class? I know which I'd have preferred at age 8. Still, seems unlikely. Judith's boys are as obnoxious as she is. Harry trying to casually bring up the rabbits was pretty well done for a child, but obviously Snape is Snape. Tobias isn't at the pub. He's hanging around Papagema. I don't believe he's drinking though. I think Severus used magic to ensure that wouldn't happen or that he'd know if it had. I like Harry and Snow's changing relationship. Good for her for getting him to do some schoolwork!
Interesting back story. Of course Severus would be considered as the one totally to blame.
Interesting back story. Of course Severus would be considered as the one totally to blame.
Thank you a great storytelling from Severus. Harry has an innate goodness and I think he feels conflicted about Severus's past actions and what he had to suffer as he understands what that feels like. I must say I agree with them about Watership Down. I did try to read it and gave up.
Wheels within wheels here! Thank you for updating and a happy new year to you and your family ( I can't remember if I said this when reviewing your story on ff). Author's Response: Aw thank you! Happy New Year to you too FMH! I think you did, in fact, and thanks so much! Yeah, things are about to start ramping up here for our boys! :X
Snow is a handful. My goodness. She's lucky she didn't get murdered. I wish she felt comfortable talking about this with Gammy or another adult, but she doesn't seem to feel with anyone. Harry is probably her closest confidant. Poor girl. On top of everything she doesn't know that Snape can read minds. I like that Harry greeted her as Snow instead of Hill. A conversation between Harry and Snape about sex is way overdue considering all of the parental drama in Harry's world. My guess: Tobias was listening to the kids and just realized he's likely Snow's father. He's not going to Morrisons, he's going to talk to Papagema at the river.
It's good that the shop seems to be a success with all the business. I like how Severus manages to fit in magic when there's a muggle at the other end of the shope. Hints that Severus is Snow's father? Nah.
Papagema is a mess. What the hell. She's so cruel. I was so proud of Snowdrop for sticking up for Gammy. It's heartbreaking to hear how Gammy cried on Christmas. Snow recognizing how Gammy is better than Papagema and that she'd rather be like Gammy is both sad and wonderful. I really feel for that girl. I've suspected that Papagema lived at the river. This drives home my theory that Snow is Tobias', not Severus'. I really can't grasp how Papagema could play with telling people different things about Snow's parentage. It's so cruel. I wonder if Harry noticed that Hans Gruber sounded a bit familiar. |
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