Another great chapter of emotional turmoil that’s so nicely portrayed. Thanks so much for continuing to post!
| Title: Lessons in Cookery(and Other Matters)
| 31 Mar 2024 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love these domestic scenes that show Severus in such a human light. He’s being so patient and insightful with both boys. It’s fun watching the boys struggle towards a steadier footing with each other.
This was an amazing chapter! Perfectly angsty while keeping Snape and Harry in character. I’m loving this story!
Ooh, what a delicious start. I’m hooked.
Yay!!! I was hoping you'd post here :)
Love this story
The way you write chapter openings is lovely. This was one of my favorites. And the rest of the chapter…well, this story has everything. So much great angst! The chapter end certainly has me wanting to see what happens! I wonder if Harry will go quietly or completely melt down.
| Title: Teatime Tales and New Betrayals
| 30 Mar 2024 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the wonderfully long chapter. I like how everything is unraveling for Harry—well, I mean the opportunity for a breakthrough that the angst provides. If Snape wasn’t acting like such a git, I might even feel sorry for him with two traumatized adolescents in his care. Maureen was a lovely character addition.
Ack, Harry, no! I hope Snape finds out what Malfoy’s up to soon. I like the explanation for Harry’s anger and how he’s expressing it. Thanks for your compelling story!
| Title: An Ill-Fated Shopping Trip
| 30 Mar 2024 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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The opening of the chapter was beautifully written. Seeing a certain wizard in a Muggle grocery store was so entertaining! I like how Snape is starting to see Harry as a puzzle to be figured out. Thanks for another great chapter!
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