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Reviews For Damage control
I love how you wrote the conversation. I'm excited to see where it goes!
Fantastic start! Wow, great descrptions and set up. I love how juvinille Harry is and how Snape is finally acting like an adult. Poor Harry though. Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to follow up someday, it was meant as a sort of break from my other bigger fic so I hope to get back to it.
lovely lovely ♥a039;
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you, that would be great! I'm no longer on discord so I'm not sure how to send you the chapter - we don't have personal messages here, so... Perhaps a different place, Reddit?
Good start with a cliffie ending thank you. Just a point Dudley is Harry's cousin not nephew. Author's Response: Thank you! I've corrected that. Glad you enjoyed this bit, and I hope to continue this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Will endeavor to update soon-ish |
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